Hi Michael.
I would like to explain what a couple of the guys are talking about here.
You are writing in a style that is completely appropriate for texting and for quick, informal blog posts with people of your age range.
As soon as you said the word "business" you stepped in a new room with a completely different standard for writing. You need to write like you were going for an "A" in English class. You can practice this right here and now.
Step one: Use capitalization and punctuation.
You wrote:
at don
i have been doing friends and family items but it is not getting the turn around i expected but i agree with you it will take time (i'm sixteen now so time i have plenty of)
thank you for you reply
at Anthony
i definitely agree with you on the fact that not every one will agree that it is a living or for me new tool money and i have had the people that think that because their getting it from me it will be cheaper then retail prices and i have been trying to make a contract up but i want something that is simply worded and can conform to any business changes i want to make any way thank you for you reply
Here it is with Punctuation and Capitalization (and a couple of word changes):
To Don:
I have been doing 'friends and family' items, but I am not getting the turn around I expected. I agree with you it will take time. (I'm sixteen now so time i have plenty of time.)
Thank you for you reply.
To Anthony:
I definitely agree with you on the fact that not every one will agree that it is a living (or for me, new tool money.) I have had the people who think that because they are getting it from me it will be cheaper than retail prices. I also have been trying to make a contract up, but I want something that is simply worded and can conform to any business changes I want to make.
Anyway, thank you for you reply.
Keep going, Michael. Hug your English teacher.
Brian
Veni Vidi Vendi Vente! I came, I saw, I bought a large coffee!